
hope...
I never got a chance to read any of Nida Fazli’s shairi but the first one I read is impressive. Nice thought and choice of words….Good poetry!
Arz kia hai :))
Jitni buree kahi jati hai inti buree nahi hai dunya
Bachoun ke school main shayed tum se milli nahi hai dunya
Chaar gharoun key aik muhalley ke bahar bhi hai aabadi
Jaisi tumhein dikhai di hai, sab ki wohi nahin hai dunya
Ghar main hi mat ussey sajao, idher udher bhi le key jao
Yun lagta hai jaisey tum se ab tak khuli nahin hai dunya
Bhag rahi hai gaind (ball) ke peechey, jaag rahi hai chaand ke neechey
Shor bhareu kaley na’aroun se ab tak dari nahi hai dunya!!!
I really like the last shair….it shows hope!














yes its really a lovely ghazal.he has got a complete command over the thoughts…
I share the below
KAUN HOGA IS KADAR
KAUN HOGA IS KADAR KAHAN TANHA
UMRA GUZRI HAI ZIS KADAR YAHAN TANHA
WO BHI GUZRA HUA SA WAQT HUA
YE ZAMIN MILI KAHAN KAHAN TANHA
LOG RAKHTE RAHE PAL PAL KA HISAAB
RAAH KAT_TI RAHI TANHA TANHA
KAISE PARWAZ AB DIKHAIE DEGI
RAAT KALI AUR AASMA TANHA
RAAKH KE DHER ME AB WO PHOOL KAHAN
AAG BUZHTI SI AUR DHUAN TANHA
USNE HAATHON KA LIKHA PADH KAR KAHA
TOO RAHEGA ZANAM ZANAM YAHAN TANHA